Nowadays, young ones experiencing more freedom than ever before, this essay will discuss positive as negative effects to our society and provide examples.
For generation, kids and teenagers have been controlled by their guardians till they graduated and become productive part of our society. Parents have been protecting their children from all negative aspects of life outside. Teenagers have not been allowed to party till their eighteen years, even though, as long they have shared household with mom and dad their freedom have been limited. In my opinion, young generation was not prepared adequately for real life happening behind the fence of their home caused by over carrying from their guardians. From the other hand, discipline and routine have been followed on daily basis to make them more organised for future life.
In these days, still more underaged individuals joining kids gangs, living underground lifestyle and involving themself into crime. Lack of interest or excessive freedom given from responsible adults plays significant part in this behaviour. Childs loosing their cognitive functions and polite behaviour as their are not set with knowing what is so called after the limit. For example if kid is not said, that taking someones stuff without asking and approval is wrong, he or she will be more likely taking others stuff or become thief.
To sum up, parents should find the middle way how to go along with new generation of kids and teenagers to keep maintain good habits and prepare them for adult life. On the other hand, we live just once as we are young and our world and society is changing rapidly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, for example, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09293680297 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41406811822 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64312267658 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0718824705 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186120730082 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700465698458 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688956428245 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107584431194 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760595249903 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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