In recent years, the family structure has changed as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think this changes are positive or nagative?
breast is an aggressive bone malignancy that mainly affects children and adolescents. Given the increasing need for new therapeutic approaches for advanced and metastatic breast patients.
Therapeutics targeting B7-H3 are being actively explored. The anti-B7-H3 monoclonal antibody Enoblituzumab (MGA271) was shown to reduce growth of renal cell and bladder carcinoma xenografts in mice [57]. it is currently being tested as a monotherapy in a phase I dose-escalation study in patients with refractory cancers (NCT01391143), and interim results show that it is well tolerated and has antitumor activity [58]. it is also being evaluated in combination with ipilimumab (anti-CTLA-4 mab) or pembrolizumab (anti-PD-1 mab) in safety studies of refractory cancers (trial NCT02381314 and NCI201501495). The murine mab 8h9 was found to target an unknown antigen on many solid tumors, and only recently has this antigen been discovered to be B7-H3 [59]. Radioimmunoconjugated 8h9 with cytotoxic I131 is currently in phase I trials for central nervous system and peritoneal tumors (NCT01099644 and NCT01502917), and other groups are testing 8h9 with other toxic conjugates [60] in murine models. targeting B7-H3 in combination with other treatments has synergistic effects in animal models, as seen in pancreatic tumor grafts treated with gemcitabine [61] and lymphoma xenografts with idarubicin and cytarabine
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...erated and has antitumor activity [58]. it is also being evaluated in combination ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78536585366 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3204645504 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668292682927 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5758671831 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.777777778 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.017461893965 0.244688304435 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0071485981779 0.084324248473 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0141854723038 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00923903376726 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00923903376726 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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