In recent years, the family structure has changed as well as family roles. What are the changes which have occurred? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
It is true that modern life has brought about a number of significant changes in terms of family structure and the roles of family members. There are some important changes that have taken place, and in my opinion these changes are positive.
To begin with, some traditional family roles and structures have now been a thing of the past. Firstly, the most important revolution has been the increasing trend for women to pursue careers, even when they are married. For example, in many families, husbands help their wives to do household chores, which were once considered "women's work". Secondly, many people nowadays put their studies and work first before marriage and before having children. Since people who are at the early stage of their career usually have lower income compared to when they get older, so they decide to have children later after having accumulated enough money to ensure a better life for their family.
Additionally, I believe such developments are positive because of some reasons. The first reason is that children will learn to become independent at an early age. Kindergartens and nursery schools offer places for children to play and learn to socialise, enabling working parents to earn enough money for their family to enjoy a high standard of living. The second reason is that parents of families with double income can invest more in the education and well-being of their children, this allows their children to have more chances and choices in life such as attending university for academic studies or studying abroad with high quality education. As a result, they will gain essential qualifications to make their way in the modern world of work.
In conlusion, the loss of traditional family is inevitable, and it seems to me that this is a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10067114094 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65139747354 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577181208054 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9236024822 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19858950242 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760241988998 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848835776739 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152058563346 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121239724581 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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