In recent years, governments have invested huge money on some main fields to create a strong country. Some people think that governments should invest as much as money as possible on improving the education system. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on solving other urgent problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In modern societies, almost all authorities from a myriad of countries in the world are spending a large amount of money to reinforce their regions in many fields. It is believed that they should invest money to develop education, others, on the other hand, think that humans can use money to deal with pressing issues. From my perspective, I would argue that it is better for governments to focus on addressing demanding problems.
Admittedly, education plays a pivotal role in humans’ life thus governments have a tendency to devote a huge amount of money to boost the education system. Education is a worthwhile investment since it is an important way to produce talented people who can contribute numerous outstanding and virtuous resources as well as develop the community in a variety of areas, including economy, politics and so on. It is difficult to enhance a country thoroughly if it lacks infrastructures, suitable learning environments and the administration does not encourage and offer opportunities for individuals to attend school. Nevertheless, investment in education is a long process so humans should divide this money which is spent on education to solve other social matters.
Additionally, these days, people are facing a multitude of problems and I believe that t is necessary for authorities to invest money to deal with these matters. Environmental challenges, diseases, and poverty are almost all topical topics that spark humans’ attention, thus investing in them to improve the quality of life is inevitable. Take Covid19 as an example, when padamic appears and becomes a major issue, the number of infections rises day by day, resulting in many deaths around the world, it is imperative for people to invest in the medical field in terms of efficient vaccines, proper medical facilities, and adequate medicine for patients. Apparently, should humans be able to handle immediate problems, they are more likely to pay attention to developing long-standing solutions.
To sum up, education and other social matters are necessary to improve yet it seems to me that governments should invest money to address urgent problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... thoroughly if it lacks infrastructures, suitable learning environments and the a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31486880466 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06120227675 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580174927114 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9818496175 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.916666667 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313966970576 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107141748832 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739883272255 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194623472931 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429266632375 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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