The world is totally changed into a global village due to the advancement in technology therefore, communication technology and advanced transportation have made it easier for people to move from one place to another. Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
On the one hand, there are some people who believe that merits of migration from one place to another considerebly outweigh its demerits. The main reason for believing this is that most of the people are well educated and they have a full freedom to work and live at their favourite place. It is also possible to say that advancement in transportation has also led them to move anywhere else in the world. One good illustration of this is that in the past era, people were illiterate and only work in their native area due to lack of transportation and knowledge of having communication with strangers.
On the other hand, there are some antagonists to this assertion who argue that it has disadvantages too. They bolster their view point by claiming that, despite the development of communication technology and transportation, although people face difficulity by working at new place and where they want to live. They further believe that people would face out various obstacles by going and adjusting themselves in a new environment. For instance, if one goes to an another place for work and to settle down, it would be very costly for him as he have to pay enormous money for living and fulfill the necessities at a new place.
As we have seen there are number of answers to this question however, I tend to believe that it depends upon person to person either they want to work and live at their native place or want to change it. Although it had become a trend and more and more people prefer to follow it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'full freedom'.
Suggestion: full freedom
... people are well educated and they have a full freedom to work and live at their favourite pla...
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Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... want to live. They further believe that people would face out various obstacles ...
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a place' or 'another place'.
Suggestion: a place; another place
...vironment. For instance, if one goes to an another place for work and to settle down, it would b...
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Line 5, column 547, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
..., it would be very costly for him as he have to pay enormous money for living and fu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72274143302 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77779621698 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520249221184 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0926981837 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161043700758 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568399420886 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481813696179 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920076784738 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218166665659 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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