As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling ,there is an growing demand for more flights what problem does this have an the environment, what measure could be taken to solve?
it can be observed that as people want to save their time ,they prefer to travel through the fastest means of transport , as result the necessity of flights or more planes are increasing day by day,such a trend is affecting the environment harmfully ,However , there are some steps as discussed below in the essay to tackle the problem.
To begin with problems , gasses are emitted from the burning of fuel which is used to operate air crafts, are causing alot of air pollution,due to this the carbon , monoxide and the carbon dioxide rations are escalating in the atmosphere. As a result , it leads to ozone layer depletion,there is no protection to the earth from the ultraviolet rays that come from the sun. For example, 70% of dreadful gases in the atmosphere are an effect of the over use of airplanes are contributing to global warming.Another issue of such a trend is that these space machines require alot of raw material for their maunfacturing ,Thus, it wastes a singificant amount of natural resources of earth ,such as , coal ,petroleum and natural gas.
One of the solution to rectify the increasing environmental problems would be taxing the flights or increasing the prices of tickets.people towards the other cheap sources of travelling such as, through the land transports.For example, people would prefer going by bus rather than paying a double amount for the same in developing countries ,futhermore, people should be awere about natural sources.like as,coal ,water and other some.
In conclusion, although,travelling by flights is liked by well of people ,i believe that, it is not only puts bad impact on ecosystem ,butalso,it is extremely harmful for economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07673111147 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.918089744 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 234.0 106.682146367 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.1666666667 7.06120827912 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206594076217 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848927576333 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522884922558 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115697234502 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380891924956 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.5 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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