As a result of tourism and the increasing number of travelling , there is an growing demand for more flights.
What problems does this have on the environment?
What measures could be taken to solve the problem?
It is true that many people are travelling across the world every day in order to explore new tourist drawcard , entertainment and entrepreneur . Therefore, the number of airplane services have also risen , which will adversely affect the eco-system significantly. This essay will examine consequences of environmental issues due to excessive air travelling and possible solutions to address with this issue more effectively.
The first reason for environmental problem is that massive pollution. In fact, people usually chart many airline services to reach their far off destination quickly and easily. The aeroplane generates more amount of fumes and sound than vehicles on road. Consequently, they certainly ruin the surroundings in numerous ways such as global warming, outbreak many health ailments and affects the growth of plants and trees. Moreover, building a airport in an area is a daunting work and the authority needs to be destroyed huge geographical area in which they will log of many trees and remove the soil for a better facilities like high rise buildings, tower , flyover and so on.
There are some possible solutions to deal with this problem perfectly. To provide awareness programme to the public and hence it can be controlled somewhat ,especially those rely on flight every time and encourage them to find alternative mode of transportation to travel. For instance, transport systems like train, tram , public transport as well as eco-friendly vehicles are generate relatively very less quantity of environmental issues than air way service. Besides this, the organisation should cut down the number of unnecessary air services especially charted and domestic flights among nation ,whereas people can access non polluted way of transport like carpooling system. Thus , this is clear that if the government should take a serious initiative to this major concern,it can be solved more effective way.
In conclusion, many people, across the globe, do travelling as a part of their daily life for different purposess, but many of them do not know the great impact of airline pollution as well as destruction of surrounding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40178571429 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98768747715 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633928571429 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.170447999 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.642857143 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152204848507 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532796469028 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405311634647 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824655598135 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030137336353 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.