Aiding the poorer countries by richer countries is not solution so, richer counties ought to help poorer counties by other means.Aiding a person or country by money cannot solve their problem even make more if richer countries want to help developing counties they should help in sector to giving them employment.This aiding money should used by government invest for giving people of countries to give them education and employment and these countries should provide support them to learn from their experience.
Only giving money to less developed countries is not solution of their problem and help them very little.I make people more even lazier and effect the integrity and sovereignty of country.These fund government use on developmental work to win the election no long term goals sets.For example in japan after bomb blast country stand its own not on aid from country.By taking aid from rich country most of their revenue is used to removing circular debt.Financial aid is like you take some thing and you have to return it to it not giving you it is for struggling time.In Pakistan Income support program which provide 1000/- to every family which i don't thick so help them more, in spite of used this money to develop a industry and take employs from these poor family make the difference in their life.
If these rich countries really want to help poorer they have to provide other also type of assistant teach and train people from less developed countries and give them their experience to tackle such problems.Like in Pakistan due to terrorists attacks and law and order situation of country economy of country is declined huge amount of debts was been taken and now each and every person have debt of 20000/-on it.Developed countries should invest in these countries and provide technical support to country,encourage the small industries,education and employment these countries will make prosper itself.
At the end financial aiding is not root solution of poorer countries all the countries who take assistant did not release from their debt except for few, in these countries debt remove by their own will.If these country make aid of the country it should be in true term fully support provide.Money is not cause of country poverty but the leadership which make good decision for their nation no one can take away from any situation when you will not.
- some people perfer same thing in whole life but other perfer change dicuss both the point and give your opinine, 78
- in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing.what do you think are causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them 78
- some people think that music is good way to bring people of different ages and culture together. to what extend do you agree or disagree. 84
- most of the people spend their life in doing job. job satisfaction is important factor in individual well being.how many factor which provide work satisfaction.is it realistic having expectation of job satisfaction for all worker 84
- now a days the way people intract has changed becaused of technology.in what way technology has effect relationship people make.has th became positive or negative development. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Aiding
... to help poorer counties by other means.Aiding a person or country by money cannot sol...
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Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to develop' or 'develop'.
Suggestion: to develop; develop
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...elp in sector to giving them employment.This aiding money should used by government ...
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...he integrity and sovereignty of country.These fund government use on developmental wo...
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Suggestion: Financial
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...ou it is for struggling time.In Pakistan Income support program which provide 100...
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...ncome support program which provide 1000 to every family which i don apos;t thick...
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Suggestion: was; has been
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Suggestion: , education
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Suggestion: If
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: Money
...d be in true term fully support provide.Money is not cause of country poverty but the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, except for, for example, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99496221662 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71010739511 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476070528967 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 99.0 20.2975951904 488% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.706484738 49.4020404114 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 495.75 106.682146367 465% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 99.25 20.7667163134 478% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.75 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390379479765 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.282865266675 0.084324248473 335% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643085974913 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282865266675 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643085974913 0.056905535591 113% => OK
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Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-grader is sensitive.
Rates: 66.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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