The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart below depict that four European countries Bratin,France,Itlay and germany amount spent on six consumer goods personal stereos,tennis recquests,perfumes,toys,CDs and photographic films from hundrad to one eighty thousand pounds strelings.In this report we are going to discuss expendutre of different nations on these items.
Firstly,Bratin spending on photograhic films is highest as compare to other goods,and lostest at personal stereos up to one seventy thousand pounds strelings.Although,Britan with comparion to other countries expenduture are highest on all mention six items.Secondly,France spending is enormously high in photograhic film and lost in tennis recquests with respect to other things.However,in CDs slightly higher and in toys similar than Itlay.Yet,at personals steros ,perfumes and tennis recquest lower than that of both Italay and germany.
Thirdly,Itlay is spending almost one sisty thousand pounds sterlings on toys and on each other items not less than one fifty thousand pounds strelings.Lastly,germany spending extravagantly on tennis recquest and least on photographic films.
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...he chart below depict that four European countries Bratin,France,Itlay and german...
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... goods personal stereos,tennis recquests,perfumes,toys,CDs and photographic films from hu...
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...to one eighty thousand pounds strelings.In this report we are going to discuss exp...
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...fferent nations on these items. Firstly,Bratin spending on photograhic films is highes...
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...o one seventy thousand pounds strelings.Although,Britan with comparion to other countrie...
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...hat of both Italay and germany. Thirdly,Itlay is spending almost one sisty thousand p...
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...han one fifty thousand pounds strelings.Lastly,germany spending extravagantly on tenni...
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...e fifty thousand pounds strelings.Lastly,germany spending extravagantly on tennis recque...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21290322581 4.92477711251 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.36671737161 2.65546596893 164% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.4926829268 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.390067485 43.030603864 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 321.0 112.824112599 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.6666666667 22.9334400587 225% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.0 5.23603664747 573% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094794657522 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810272078781 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106664874702 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810272078781 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106664874702 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.7 13.2329268293 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.79 61.2550243902 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 10.3012195122 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.63 11.4140731707 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.16 8.06136585366 138% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 11.4329268293 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.9970731707 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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