A large number of individual do online shopping. There are various reasons associated with it and it impacts the society and local shops postively as well as negatively. Both the aspects will be explained in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with the reason of doing online shopping by the individuals,the major one is busy schedule of masses. Today people are busy their jobs and houshold chores. So,they have no time for offline shopping. To illustrate, a survey was conducted by BBC news, they observed that 85% people prefer online shopping as they have busy schedule. A long with this, online shopping is convinient for masses. They can easily purchase something from their home. Sometimes, they can buy things on discount.
It has both postive and negative effects on societies and local shops. Online shopping has some negative impacts on shops because the sales decrease and it is not good for shopkeepers. However, it has a postive effect on communities. As number of choices are available in products. They can save their time and buy things on discount so, they save their money.
In conclusion, busy schedule and convenience are the main causes of preferring online shopping by the individuals which has both benefits and drawbacks for them, however, it influences the local vendors in negative way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of individual do online shopping. There ar...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...line shopping. There are various reasons associated with it and it impacts the so...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...doing online shopping by the individuals,the major one is busy schedule of masses. T...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
... busy their jobs and houshold chores. So,they have no time for offline shopping. To i...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...it has a postive effect on communities. As number of choices are available in prod...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14418604651 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72227754359 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.312626518 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.125 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4375 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0655426054982 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240577417687 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339397115973 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0365478640362 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264207142508 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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