The rise of social media has led to a decrease in face-to-face interaction. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
In this day and age, getting access to social media becomes popular with people worldwide, causing less direct interaction. Despite manifold perks, this trend can reduce face-to-face communication and creat an insecure networking environment.
That this change can make a contribution to preventing the spread of diseases is one of the benefits for society. More specifically, meeting in person can easily creat favorable conditions for infectious diseases to form community transfer. For instance, during the period of the Covid-19 outbreak, using Facebook or Instagram as well as curbing interaction serves as a fruitful method to diminish the strain of the disease. Another advantage is that the number of accidents can be lowered. In other words, if people were at home and surfed the internet, there would be fewer incidents due to the low vehicle and commuters rate. Thus, this can lessen the speed of the deterioration in the infrastructure, lightening the air pollution in the environment.
However, that people cannot talk directly is considered as a weakness of this shift. In fact, less verbal communication can form a barrier among people and make them have a sense of self-deprecation in meeting in reality. For example, after a long time of depending on social media to chat with friends or strangers, people tend to have a feeling of shyness when communicating directly. Besides, an encumbrance is that numerous users logging in platforms of social media can make the network insecure. The fact of the matter is that administrators cannot control a lot people accessing the network per day and immediately handle it if a problem arises. Hence, it can threaten the secure of people and bad guys can take a chance to infiltrate and steal personal information such as bank accounts,...
To conclude, using social media more instead of face-to-face communication can bring plenty of conveniences, nevertheless, its negative consequences should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35463258786 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14879530295 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2650513519 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.733333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180662040234 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594377644666 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695328176572 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141645459811 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866551565314 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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