schools offer a wide range of courses such as physical education, music, economics, psychology, math, philosophy, english, geography, physics and history. among all these subjects which one do you think is the most important and which one is the least important.
A large number of subjects,namely physical education, music, economics, psychology, math, philosophy, english, geography, physics and history, are taught in school. I believe that from these subjects, physical education in imperative whereas history plays the least role in children's life.
Having physical education subject in student's syllabus has several benefits. The first benefit is that if schools provide this subject, the students become more conscious about their health. Since, when children are more healthy, they can concentrate more on other subjects, so physical education indirectly increases the grades of other subjects. Apart from this, students learn many skills such as leadership, cooperation, communication and team work which leads to the overall development of the students. That is why i think it is the most important subject.
On the other hand, history is the least important subject in my point of view because in this subject, the knowledge which the students grab is not useful in their future life. For instance the dates of wars; and births and deaths of kings as well as the name of the emperors are taught in class which are unnecessary things for students. This also makes the subject boring, due to this they hate to study and do not pay attention to their other subjects, which directly impact their overall grades.
To conclude, physical education is important because it is conducive to learn different skills and keep our body fit while history is not important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, whereas, while, apart from, for instance, i think, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30833333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72334302324 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9769395013 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.818181818 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281179183979 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114168696355 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627913543669 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167118658719 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334088932783 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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