Science is the study of knowledge derived from facts. Obviously, it offers people several advantages, which are beneficial for their daily living. Aside from this favorable impact, such innovation also gives setback, which can be detrimental to the society in general. Various reasons can be given, why the public continue to utilize it, despite its negative effects to humanity.
Firstly, science's popularity increases due to health state nowadays. The rampancy of various diseases are constantly increasing, yet medical breakthroughs are being discovered from time to time. Albeit the benefits of these interventions, scientific solutions are always a double bladed weapon, wherein side effects to human body must be considered. For instance, medicine ingestion is accounted to be the most common cause of kidney failure today.
Moreover, science and technology widen networks or connections. It augments swift communication, whereas persons may be able to keep in touch, despite their distances to each other. However, to much use of these contemporary methods may lessen personal social interaction, which leads to isolation. For example, study shows that children, who are exposed to gadgets even at their very young age, commonly portray antisocial behavior towards their playmates.
In addition, adverse effects of science can be lessen through responsible use of it. Some of the ways to suppress it include avoidance of dependency. Gadgets or devices must be used sparingly or when needed only. Also, medical treatments can be refrained through preventive measures such as healthy lifestyle, regular exercise and proper diet.
In summary, it is evident, that science pave way to the advent of different advancements, which foster benefits to the society. Some of its negative implications can be prevented, hence moderation of usage must be observed.
- Science tells us about the activities which are good for our health and others which are bad. Millions of people all over the world knows this and still do unhealthy activities. Why do you think this is and what can be done to change it? 84
- Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their dayly lives. What are these problems? Do you think thatthe government should encourage people to move in smaller towns? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...their distances to each other. However, to much use of these contemporary methods ...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...e lessen through responsible use of it. Some of the ways to suppress it include avoidance o...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'includes'?
Suggestion: includes
... of it. Some of the ways to suppress it include avoidance of dependency. Gadgets or dev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in general, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61130742049 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89504332103 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667844522968 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9434470216 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175395261571 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512870018383 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328926769016 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961797216994 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418603653298 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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