Science tells us about the activities which are good for our health and others which are bad. Millions of people all over the world know this and still do unhealthy activities. Why do you think this is and what can be done to change it.
Due to advancements in the medical field, it has become simple to identify the reasons for a disease and categorize the healthy and unhealthy practices. Although there is much awareness among people about this, they still follow an ailing lifestyle. There are several reasons and remedies to tackle this trend.
To start with, there are numerous justifications for people to practice an unsound living. Firstly, the sedentary way of jobs leaves no time to participate in sports or any other recreational events. In addition to this, the urge to sustain in the highly competitive world is growing among people which make them neglect their health. For example, There is no sports hour allocated in a majority of schools and colleges because they believe it as a waste of time. Next, few others are over-optimistic
that they feel they will not be affected by any illness that is showcased in the TV or Media and simply ignore the cautions.
There are enormous ways to change the way of living. Creating awareness among individuals is the responsibility of government. Authorities should organize campaigns and spread the knowledge about the harmful results of unhealthy activities such as eating high calory foods, smoking and consuming alcohol. Next, Media must educate people and telecast programs which tells people that health is more important than wealth. This can be achieved by telecasting programs which help them to get fit.
In conclusion, people are aware of the consequences of an unhealthy lifestyle and still practice it for several reasons such as lack of time and thirst to earn money. However, there are several remedies to balance both.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are no sports'?
Suggestion: There are no sports
...them neglect their health. For example, There is no sports hour allocated in a majority of schools...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... their health. For example, There is no sports hour allocated in a majority of schools...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74566374674 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581481481481 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3503190905 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235007890727 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682983029829 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532302491491 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110066187311 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058983736121 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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