Science will soon make people live up to 100 or even 200 years. Some believe this is good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
According to researchers, people’s lifespan will increase by 100 or 200 years. Although some disagree, others think this is a positive thing. There are statements on both sides that will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, the opponents of this view say that the increase of longevity will has negative effects on both the world and the next generation. The younger generation may need to put in more effort to meet the needs of the elderly (and) they may also need to take on additional responsibilities, such as caring for their parents at home. The elderly will therefore add more burdens to their children and grandchildren. Moreover, the world will also need to expand its food supply because of overpopulation, which is able to exploit lands to provide food or human population. Should the food supply not exist, it will cause hunger and mortality.
On the other hand, Living for a century or more may be a fantastic opportunity for the elderly and the old may also assist younger people in gaining more experience, despite their age. As a result, the elder generation will have a lot more time to share the acquired experience with family, friends, and especially their grandkids. Furthermore, productivity levels go up because they are able to become people who are more prolific. For instance, individuals who can gain more 100 years old, so they think to attain their goal which has targeted to reach their career height.
In summary, it seems true that the benefits of modern technology in medical science can give people more longevity for achievement in their life, While in my opinion, the modern technology should be used for other positive activity like education to make it better generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...say that the increase of longevity will has negative effects on both the world and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in summary, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97577854671 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76767729248 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0005917131 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.615384615 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197583041852 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774029352467 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578618550629 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139394047697 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883771799495 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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