With the advent of new technologies and sciences, life expectancy has increased over the years. Some people suppose that extending lifetime to many more due to progress in science seems to be favorable event while others argue this would be a contributing which will have a negative impact on economics communities.
On the one hand, long healthy life will provide people with a plethora of opportunities to materialize the deepest thoughts and dreams that lie in their minds. That is to say, longer life without any chronic diseases would be a blessing for who wants to live life to the full and spend much more time with their loved ones. Take ones who are a lifelong fan of traveling and visiting new places as an example; thanks to the long healthy life which will be resulted of the scientific advancement, they will have many opportunities to experience new things. Furthermore, another justification is that the extension of human’s life will have a positive effect on industries’ productivity, as the elderly in workplaces with precious knowledge can share their experiences and skills with the younger workforces.
On the other hand, the opposing view asserts that the extension of human’s life leads to the aging of societies which will have a destructive effect on the economy. The most compelling reason for their assertion is that increased life expectancy will put an extra financial burden on governments, as they would have to invest more budget in healthcare to take care of the senior citizens. By increasing the number of people with more than 100 years of age in the future, for instance, more nurse houses and health centers will be needed. Apart from that, the long life span will eventually cause overpopulation in societies which might result in the dearth of resources and energy. Thus, some countries might encounter an energy crisis in the future.
To sum up, there are well-grounded arguments on both sides of the controversy on balance; however, it is my firm persuasion that drawbacks of the long life span far outweigh its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06976744186 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90327671505 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6687370201 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11988373298 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472824129268 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343267694386 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806402579479 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395783150389 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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