Scientific research are carried and controlled by governments rather than private companies.
Do you agree or disagree
Give an example from your knowledge
Some argue, scientific research are maintained by governments while, others argue that private companies should be taking the initiative.However, I completely agree that private companies should be taking care of the scientific research as their achievements and advancements much inclined towards better future.
Firstly, scientific research takes long timer than to achieve.Government although provides equipment's to scientists goods and services they provide are of low cost which cannot be performed with.For instance government take supplies for their benefit by providing low cost and save the economy.Although their instance where government has taken scientific research way ahead but the drawbacks cannot be neglected.
On the other hand, scientists approach for private companies to get financial resources and which companies get recognition.
To delineate an example, robotics in medical fields are developing due to private sectors especially in surgeries. The artificial intelligence and the technological up-gradation from generations are conducted by private companies.The advancement in field of science like microprocessor and virtual glass are by artificial technology.
In conclusion, Though there is difference in working condition of both sectors, than working in a different zones they can work together for betterment of future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13612565445 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43011461144 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649214659686 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.55063407 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.333333333 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8333333333 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1666666667 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193534532406 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809376015961 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474911346675 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873489984687 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528885351584 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.63 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.92 12.4159519038 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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