Scientific research is said to be conducted and managed by the authorities instead of financial independence companies. I partly agree with this statement due to two main reasons.
On the one hand, personal enterprises should not be the ones who take up and follow scientific project since it is costly and time-consuming. National budget is allocated for various aspects such as education, military, healthcare, and so on while the charge for a research is high, so it is not afford for this field. Besides that, purchasing an analysis for a long time and receiving no consequence may trigger an unsatisfaction of citizens, for they might assume that they need the governments to invest on other vital aspects; However, private corporations may have enough time and money to accomplish this.
On the other hand, a research supervised by governments has higher successful rate and guarantee. Some complicated studies require international cooperation, and independent organizations may not be able to complete that. Moreover, scientific research governed by national organization frequently supervised by many professors and experts, hence getting an expected result. For example, during the Covid-19 epidemic period, loads of nations, namely China or America, have tried their best to study and produce the vaccine for residents; As a result, the expansion of the pandemic has been hindered significantly.
In conclusion, I believe that both the governments and private companies are encourage to join hand to (undertake ) a study in order to save time and achieve better outcomes.
- Gender equality has not been achieved in our society Women still do not have the same rights and opportunities as men To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
- The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons 78
- In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this How can people research this 61
- IN SOME COUNTRIES MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTERESTED IN FINDING OUT ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LINE IN WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS HOW CAN PEOPLE RESEARCH THIS 78
- Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university to work or to travel Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: I
...ad of financial independence companies. I partly agree with this statement due to...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Suggestion: afforded
...ge for a research is high, so it is not afford for this field. Besides that, purchasin...
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Suggestion: I
...hindered significantly. In conclusion, I believe that both the governments and p...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44308943089 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15683058635 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654471544715 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3953414464 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.9 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161917509979 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665553102326 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040610750718 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100744540488 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171251930552 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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