Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals claim that scientific studies should be conducted by governments instead of companies. I agree with the view that not only governments but every company needs to be responsible for carrying out research.
To begin with, there is no doubt that the authorities have a responsibility to conduct scientific research. This is because the governments of different countries can co-operate with each other, they may be able to conduct studies on a larger scale, which require a larger investment. For instance, the UK and the EU share common fundamental challenges such as dealing with climate change, tackling infectious diseases in people, animals and plants. Thanks to these collaborations, the top scientists across countries can resolve these fundamental challenges. Another reason for this is that governments tend to pay attention to research areas that can benefit society as a whole. Studies related to environmental issues and crime rates are great examples.
However, I would argue that companies play such an important role in conducting scientific research. The first reason is that since generating profit is the top priority for each company, they would make an effort to conduct research more quickly and more efficiently. For example, a company, like Teva has been carrying out extensive research to solve generic drug problem and then provide them for patients. This can lower out-of-pocket costs patients. The second, by investing in research fields of companies will relieve burden on government’s budget. As a result, the authorities would also have more cash to spend on other main areas including accommodation, health and medical services and particularly education which leads to improvement in the quality of life of the whole community.
In inclusion, I believe that both governments and private companies should be involved in research activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50684931507 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08368304867 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8224150274 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2337667405 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844164145747 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849825702637 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193721658336 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109188023036 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.