There is an existing argument that, governments should be responsible to conduct and regulate scientific research, rather than private companies. I will compleatetely agree with the statement, because governmental execution and control will improve the effectiveness and desired outcomes exponentially.
Sientific researches are crucial to explore existing scientific questions and find out new solutions. Government's should take part in this type of researches as it will provide enumerous benefits to the public and will increase the image of the country. Governmental involvements will provide necessary funds and human resources hence it will improve the effectiveness of researches. For example ; recent researches conducted by government of India regarding polio vaccine, proved that it may cause harm in vaccinated children than non vaccinated. If the researches were conducted by private agencies, they will try to hide the results that will reduce their income, incontrast, governments are more concerned about public,hence it should be handled by governmental agencies.
On the other hand, Control of researches are essential to guide it in a proper way, enuring the maximum output and reducing the potential harms arising from it. Government's are better in these aspects as they can impose laws to protect the rights of the people and environment taking part in the research. Public authorities will be more reliable in terms of right protection and efficency of the research.For example Government researches conducted in French alps proved that unauthorised mining was the cause of depletion in glaciers hence they imposed laws to protect galaciers. Thus , public authorities are more concerned about the environmental protection and it will improve the results abruptly.
Overall, scientific researches should be carried out by governmental agencies to provide optimum outputs. Public supervision will provide support and guidance to researches to move in a proper way.
- Some people think that modern technology making people more sociable while others think that it is making them less sociable.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- Some people think that young people should choose their professions themselves. Others believe that their parents should choose for them. Discuss both these views and give your own option. 78
- The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 78
- With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Other feel that these form of media will never disappear. What is your opinion? 22
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, regarding, so, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72881355932 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12245225419 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55593220339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8252529481 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286786099932 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112782593465 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105818557585 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205903696816 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079556682239 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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