It is observed that from decades nature showing its symptoms of disturbing balance and several disasters around the globe are apparent evidence of that. The main cause of ecological disbalance is the illogical and senseless ventures of human that leads non-renewable resources to extinct, in spite of many warnings and suggestions related to detrimental consequences. In this essay, the main factors responsible and probable solutions will be discussed for this situation.
To embark with, it is man's tendency to put everything on the verge for its own convenience and pleasure, hence they are exploiting every possible corner of the earth to gain profit, like the use of fossil fuel and natural oil. Nevertheless, uncontrolled industrialization leads to hazardous soil, air, and water pollution, without proper decomposition of radioactive or chemical byproducts they dispose them into our natural earth system. However, the majority of the population often misuse the electricity, water, and food, which is also a lifestyle they are now habitual of. In the recent piece of news by prominent "The Times", around seventy percent of forest on earth is destroyed for the purpose of agriculture, roads and creating new colonies, which resulted ultimately in disaster. Certainly, if such practices remain to continue then the end is near, and our coming generation suffers that.
On the other hand, to control and suppress these threats, civilians and governments should collaborate in a harmonious way. Instead of using non-renewable natural resources we can use the alternate renewable ones like sunlight, flowing water force and wind energy. Stringent rules and law should be passed against those industries who do not treat their byproducts before decomposing them. Apart from this, children, as well as adults, should participate in developing habits to conserve energy, afforestation is one of them for an optimistic future. In an empirical survey conducted by London's "Oxford University", around eighty percent population replaced the option of motor vehicles on roads by cycles with the help of local government policy. Assuredly, such policies can be adapted as an example to implement in many other countries.
To conclude, mother earth also giving signals that, enough has happened, problems like Green House Effect, unpredictable weather change, shortage of food, water, and fresh air, and many more could lead to worse detrimental situations if no solid steps are taken by current inhabitantes of this globe.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a harmonious way" with adverb for "harmonious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ians and governments should collaborate in a harmonious way. Instead of using non-renewable natural...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, apart from, in fact, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53076923077 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04390942956 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9116274001 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.8 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108273575205 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330660935366 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264766152035 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603061741249 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164551310593 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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