It is observed that in developing countries the Multinational companies are exploding due to different factors. The realm of international organizations is soaring high, which is now have an evident impact in upliftment as well as downfalls in developing countries. In this essay, both perspectives will be discussed.
To embark with, multinational companies always look for the possible profitable market and cheap resources, countries like India, Bhutan, Srilanka and many more provide the same for the purpose. Hence the local organizations suffer from the comprehensive reach of these big sharks in their business areas. In the recent news article from "The Times", around fifty-four percent of economical perks are taken by these industries from developing countries in terms of labor and resources, it helps their own country to develop more and solidify their currency in the world. Consequently, to give strength for the local businesses and reduce the dependency from these organizations the government seeks several projects like "Make in India".
On the other hand, these companies provide a multi-culture environment and exposed to their employees, by this, the candidates feel more confident and able to achieve more opportunities overseas. Apart from this, these organizations are also eminent sources of jobs and financial boom in developing countries. Exposer of new technology to simplify work and a large number of methodologies of their brand, also provide some good competitive encouragement to the local inventors and manufacturers for performing well. In an empirical survey conducted by London's "Oxford University", it is ascertained that about sixty-seven percent of these organizations are associated with several educational institutes. Which ultimately, improving the education system and providing young ones an opportunity to be creative and imaginative with new ideas.
To conclude, although the multinational companies impact the economic structure, also utilizing cheap resources and labors of developing countries, but it is inevitable that they are also providing a large number of jobs and unlimited opportunities for locals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...nizations is soaring high, which is now have an evident impact in upliftment as well...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... more provide the same for the purpose. Hence the local organizations suffer from the...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... of new technology to simplify work and a large number of methodologies of their brand, also prov...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...inevitable that they are also providing a large number of jobs and unlimited opportunities for lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, look, so, well, apart from, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85358255452 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34522292178 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8104047466 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.538461538 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144692438938 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604144958016 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593781752191 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113308315159 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053187624216 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.95 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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