Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that education for people to eat less junk food could tackle this problem. Others claim that education will not work. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recent years have witnessed an excessive growth in unhealthy food consumption, posing a wide range of detrimental threats to human health. While some feel that education cannot be an effective method, I agree with those who believe that this practice would serve as a workable solution to address such a problem.
On the one hand, it could be argued that education would not always be a suitable measure. Advocates of this view assert that the modern living style is the root cause of this issue, which would not be efficiently resolved by education. It is especially true in this challenging world when a multitude of employers have to experience a heavy workload. As a result, for the sake of time-saving, fast food becomes an ideal option due to its convenience and portable manner.
However, I side with those who endorse education as an effective key to the junk food overconsumption problem. Firstly, knowledge could be a barrier, deter people from opting for unhealthy food. The more one comprehends the deleterious effect of junk food, the more likely one would put an end to such a harmful eating habit. Moreover, in the long term, that method could have some positive sustainable impacts on the next generations’ awareness and behavior. For example, in a family, if the parents consistently preferred and prepared healthy meals, eating clean would also be a habit for their offspring.
To conclude, although in many specific cases, education could not be an effective method, I firmly believe that measures would significantly control excessive junk food consumption and prevent the problem from being exacerbated further.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16541353383 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88183826798 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7018518075 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238880610699 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854498615275 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440281911637 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142220257596 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581911200553 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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