scientists and new media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change the lifestyle to prevent further damage. what are your views

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scientists and new media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change the lifestyle to prevent further damage. what are your views

it is argued that scientists and new media people were about to present most evidence of climate change .buracurate says they don't take seriously about this problem in my opinion,
it is the duty of each and every citizen responsibility to save our enviroment .
on one hand , day by day our ozone layer is compressing due heavy pollution ,internet and cutting of tree to build new buildings for example ,their are it company who buy a land from farmers to build companies for sake of money but they never think of food which provide by earth or that land simply they convert farming land into it machines so that they can earn money high farmers are poor masses they understand about land value .
on the other hand , their are three reasons to come out this phase is firstly,to bring awareness among the people throughtout the world and make understand the value of land and farming and secondly ,it is the duty of coming generations aslo to plant trees more and more and thirdly, stop going instead of going in own vehicles they go in public transport so that they save petrol and control huge amount of pollution for instance a son got state first asked a car as a gift instead of giving him a car provide some trees to plant on that day and explain about the problem he is ready face.
to sum up all , in my opinion is to save water and trees bring the awareness among the masses who are uneducate

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52156862745 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33312587131 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.707636806 49.4020404114 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.25 106.682146367 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.75 20.7667163134 307% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.25 7.06120827912 471% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904537452233 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652264681038 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840531632833 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061141334506 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792631421006 0.056905535591 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 13.0946893788 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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