Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to entail help finding in suitable accommodation. I am John from Dubai and have never been to your country Australia before.
To begin with, I got enrolled for the electric course for which I had applied two months back and this is a two year course. As the new session will be commencing on next week I will set forth to Australia on 14 February in the morning. Besides , let me allow to explicate my particular requirements regarding accommodation such as it should be in the vicinity of the public transport so I can easily catch buses , trains to my college. Moreover , it would be best if I can have easy access to supermarkets.
Apart from this , it would be great if you could list some points that I can queried from college. However ,I have been doing all the formalities and documentation since I got selected but your assistance will help me to smoothly transit to my college. I am looking forward to hear from you.
Thank you for your consideration.
Your sincerely,
John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to find' or 'find'.
Suggestion: to find; find
...I am writing this letter to entail help finding in suitable accommodation. I am John fr...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ths back and this is a two year course. As the new session will be commencing on n...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a on 14 February in the morning. Besides , let me allow to explicate my particular...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'explicating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: explicating
... in the morning. Besides , let me allow to explicate my particular requirements regarding ac...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ic transport so I can easily catch buses , trains to my college. Moreover , it wou...
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Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...h buses , trains to my college. Moreover , it would be best if I can have easy acc...
^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cess to supermarkets. Apart from this , it would be great if you could list som...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'query'
Suggestion: query
...f you could list some points that I can queried from college. However ,I have been doin...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...that I can queried from college. However ,I have been doing all the formalities an...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...sit to my college. I am looking forward to hear from you. Thank you for your considera...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, apart from, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67032967033 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8114938431 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0972173394 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2727272727 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207354812233 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872857436899 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731550752857 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141916700601 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678490792702 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.