Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is a positive development while other think that it is negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The advancement of technology is at a rapid pace. Daily, a new version or a feature is added in the existing software’s, which directly signals the researchers or scientists that the computers intelligence might take over the humans. It is considered by some people that it is an important step, as it may make life easy while others have an opposite opinion that AI might become a dictator.
On the one hand, the frequent changes and improvements in the computers have made life easier, for both common man and scientists. Where a ordinary man is enjoying the home automation and smart TV, researchers are performing complex analysis and calculations on supercomputers. Now days, the computers have moved from desktops into the pockets i.e. the size in decreasing but the efficiency and accessibility is increasing. The whole world is at a distance of a touch.
On the other hand, the computers have become an integral part of our lives and made us dependent that we are not able to remember the phone numbers. The involvement of computers is so high that they have started to breach the privacy of the user. For example, Google Maps continuously tracks the location of the smart phone or facebook is monitoring the online behavior of its user. These data collected will make the computers or Artificial Intelligence more powerful and help them take decisions.
In my opinion, the takeover of artificial intelligence will not occur in recent years, it might take few decades. However, if there are formulation of suitable laws related to the digital world or proper guidelines are issued to check the interventions the AI may become a good companion rather than a ruler.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
Suggestion: computers'; computer's
... the researchers or scientists that the computers intelligence might take over the humans...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r both common man and scientists. Where a ordinary man is enjoying the home autom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99644128114 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96131600558 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1109755517 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16864710006 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492237146258 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442168516001 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944974543625 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367989357757 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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