Scientists believe that in the near future cars will be driven by computers What are the reasons behind it Would it be a positive or negative development in your opinion

Increasing technology would prove that all things depend on electric equipment. Scientists think that cars will be run by computers in the near future . This essay shall discuss the both aforementioned views in the subsequent paragraphs.

On the one hand , technology has been growing day by day, so in the future cars will be driven through computers, if it may be possible, it would a better development for our nation . It would be less pollution instead of petroleum cars . Individual will do activity , while it drive such as read books , eat and many more . Moreover , disabled people who does not able to drive by own ,they will get benefits of it . Furthermore, traffic problems will be decrease and also accidents will be more less by driverless car .

On the other hand , driverless car may be sell in higher cost , so only rich people would buy it . People, who live in poverty , they would not purchase this car. Additionally, truck and taxi drivers loss their jobs . If the car crashes , without driver , whose fault for it ? software engineer or the owner of their vehicle? and also hand symbols of traffic will difficult for computers to understand. Hackers will be hack the computers easily.

To recapitulate, I reiterated to say that , driverless cars would be come in the future, however it would be not take a position of petroleum car .

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90350877193 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7792410009 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609649122807 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8815325063 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.875 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398564358361 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128708258751 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123059079848 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253019375307 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406075515345 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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