Nowadays, technology has been growing day by day . Some people argued that technology has made our life quite difficult, while others think that it has made our life much convenient. This essay shall discuss the reasons along with my opinion and examples. To commence with ,people in this advanced era prefer to live with technology such as internet, modern phones and many more . Internet is the most crucial part of technology. It has made our life easier. People can meet with their kith and kins ,who live in overseas. They talk with their family at any corner of the world . To examplify ,my uncle , who live in America with their family, so we talk with them through wats app just because of the internet, and also we see them with video call. Moreover, people use the internet not only to talk with their family and friends but also they use to ger some information from around the world instantly. Additionally, children are also using internet for their education purpose. The advancement of technology in the medical field has a impact on human life. People using this technology on health ,hence people live healthy and comfortable life . In the past , people did not get treatment of diseases like cancer and MRI scan , however in today’s life they can get better treatment, so they are living healthy life now . To recapitulate ,I reiterated to say that the technology has tremendous benefits and also it has made our life far easier then old times . This is mainly because of the use of internet and better health amenities.
- Scientists believe that in the near future cars will be driven by computers What are the reasons behind it Would it be a positive or negative development in your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80303030303 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48551466397 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1369011314 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.25 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284841727388 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112738917928 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147085602943 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284841727388 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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