In recent times, scientists have told us that some activities are good for our health while others are unhealthy. Despite the information, a lot of people still take the risk of practicing unhealthy lifestyles and this is not a welcome development to the world.
On the one hand, there are reasons why individuals still live unhealthily while knowing that it is not good for them.The issue of drug addiction comes to play whenever we think of those reasons. Drugs such as crack cocaine, heroine and crystal meth have a high rate of addiction which makes the user to keep using even though he or she knows it is bad for them. In most cases, kids always stay close to the TV screen when they are seeing a movie or during times where video games are being played. Parents have given stern warnings regarding this unhealthy behavior, but they still continue to go against those instructions. Similarly, gamblers face the same predicament during gambling. Life savings are lost in this process; the game continues because they are addicted to it.
On the other hand, these abnormalities can be solved after a broad understanding of the causes or thoroughly looking at the reasons why it is happening. Actually speaking, the issue of drug addiction cannot be solved unless the user is taken to rehab. In the case of gambling and staying close to the TV, I think their solution bothers on proper orientation to enable them stay healthy and focused.
To conclude, achievements based on healthy activities are possible; there is nothing impossible to achieve once you put your mind to it.
- Physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools Do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe Write a letter to your friend In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend 73
- People buy things which they don t need Why this is happening Is it a positive or negative development for the Individual and for society 67
- You missed an important meeting at work Write a letter to your manager In the letter Apologize for not going Explain why you were not there Say how you will make up for it 73
- Many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning Why does this happen What are the solutions money problem earn more money addictions of drugs and alcohols 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, regarding, similarly, so, still, while, i think, such as, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88518518519 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64165482076 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1966332001 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.916666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234631800786 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725772734846 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780618629152 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136030232612 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117646379983 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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