It is said by some people that the government should put health care first while others are saying that spending should be on other relevant priorities. In my opinion, I believe individuals will live a healthy life if the government considers the healthcare system in the society first, and also focusing on other important matters will still help improve the overall economy.
On the one hand, when the healthcare system in a country is prioritized, it's citizens will enjoy living healthily. In other words, new kinds of diseases can be prevented given that our leaders focus mainly on caring for the health of its citizens. In China, for instance, the people enjoy the benefits of a healthy life because they have world-class health facilities situated in different parts of the country. Clearly, if the government mainly focuses on healthcare, then everyone can enjoy the glorious benefits of living a healthy life.
On the other hand, it is important that the authorities should focus on other relevant matters such as education and construction of roads. This is because paying close attention to these areas will help improve the economy of any country. Nigeria, over the years, to exemplify, have developed to become the giant of africa mainly because we have a lot of educated people, and we enjoy the abundance of good road network. All these have brought foreign investment our way. Thus, focusing on other priorities will definitely help improve the country's economic state.
To conclude, the government's focus on healthcare will promote a healthy lifestyle for its citizens, and also paying close attention to other relevant matters like education and road construction will help boost the economic value of that society.
When priority is giving to healthcare, it will enable people live healthier
Govt should spend on education and roads.
- you have arranged a visit to close friend in Canada but an important event at home now means you will have to change the dates of visit write a letter to your friend In letter explain the important event apologize for the situation suggest a new arrangeme 61
- Some people believe that the government should not spend too much money on outer space exploration Do you agree or disagree 67
- You agreed to take a particular job over the summer but due to unforeseen circumstances you can no longer take the position Write a letter including Explaining your situation An apology Express that you would be interested in the position nex 61
- You recently did a short cookery course The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you ve done since 78
- Your friend s dog has recently passed away Write a letter to console your friend In your letter 1 Express your sympathy 2 Include memories you have about the dog 3 Invite your friend to do something with you 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, then, thus, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23588039867 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65943886798 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504983388704 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0062068389 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258888363476 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981159643189 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117286143682 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145302731332 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884344519645 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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