Sea otters are a small mammal that lives in the waters along North America's west coast from California to Alaska. A few years ago some of the sea otter populations off of the Alaskan coast started to decline rapidly and raised several concerns.
In the set of materials, the reading passage states that the decline rate of sea otter populations is due to the environmental contaminants and the predator is attacking. Nevertheless, the professor refutes the author's opinion in the lecture and explains why the growth rate of these mammals is deteriorated, and it was due to the attack of predators to sea otters.
Firstly, the article posits that pollution sources are destructive factors. In contrast, the professor contends that it is not a correct supposition. There is no expectation about the sea otter fatality, and others think it is because of the infection. While not only orcas kill sea otters and eat them, but also they do not wash the rest of the otter's corpse that this case creates a doubt between people that they died from infections.
Secondly, the reading avers that another reason is decreasing of other mammals in this area. On the other hand, the professor opposes this hypothesis and mentions this point that hunting of whales is very active in the population decline of sea otters. The professor claims that because of numerous hunting of whales, the diet of orcas are changed and they begin to hunt more and more to make food. This is why the decline has occurred.
Ultimately, the passage indicates that ocean currents and environment factors are crucial to this problem. However, the professor avers that the attacks have uneven patterns, and they are accessible to be hunted. Also, the stable population of sea otters can be found in shallow Rocky locations that this theory conflicts by the reading passage.
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- Sea otters are a small mammal that lives in the waters along North America's west coast from California to Alaska. A few years ago some of the sea otter populations off of the Alaskan coast started to decline rapidly and raised several concerns beca 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...Nevertheless, the professor refutes the authors opinion in the lecture and explains why...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'otters'' or 'otter's'?
Suggestion: otters'; otter's
...t also they do not wash the rest of the otters corpse that this case creates a doubt b...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67872114078 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533834586466 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.572362641 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.307692308 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158531547179 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545579727158 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530363832181 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991851248906 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033626707598 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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