Many Museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
Museums and historical places showcase the evidences of traditions and cultures of a region. It becomes an attraction for tourists to visit these places; however, there is still a low attendance of local citizens at these areas. This essay will discuss on the possible causes and solutions to tackle this problem.
There is a number of reasons explaining why local residents show little interest in museums and historical areas. Firstly, as local people seems to be familiar with the cultural and traditions of their areas, they have no curiosity about which are depicted at historical places and museums. In fact, many people prefer travelling to other countries to gain more knowledge about new culture and traditions rather than spending time at familiar destinations. Secondly, museums and historical houses often remain unchanged through years. Some sites even show signs of degradation, which prevents local people to pay a visit to these locations. For example, a number of facilities at Hai Phong remnant museum is now in the process of being spoiled, which prevents me to come back for a second visit. Another cause to the low number of local people’s visits is the charge of entrance fee which would be an issue for low and middle income locals.
To address this problem, there are some measures to be conducted. Primarily, historians and preservations should incorporate historical values and aesthetic appeal. The displays and concepts of museums and historical sites should have more decorations and changes during the time to create something new as a novelty for local residents. Furthermore, more investment should be poured into the improvement of display places by the government in order to reserve the premises in good condition thorough years. Finally, the government might scrap or discount the amount of entry fee for local people in some special occasions such as Independence Day, which may draw more local people to museums and historical places.
To conclude, local people might lack of interest in museums and historical areas at their region. To better this, local authorities and government can consider improving display activities and investing more in facilities and premises in such areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29295774648 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77008132113 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532394366197 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2776694639 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409754611157 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126193306098 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561569298823 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252624865708 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299094302828 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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