Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small number of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money.Discuss and giv

It is universally accepted that a number of languages are likely to disappear in the foreseeable future. The majority of people believe that governments can save a huge amount of money if they let these languages get removed. But in my opinion, it is beneficial to help these languages to survive.
There are several reasons that why it is not logical to save these languages. Firstly, protecting minority languages costs a fortune. Governments have to spend a great deal of money on these languages to survive. For example, a number of facilities, instructors, etc. should be prepared in order to teach these languages, while this money can be used for public services such as recreational equipment. Secondly, when all citizens speak with one main language, the society will be integrated, fewer problems will occur and some conflicts will be removed. As a result, citizens will understand one another much better.
On the other hand, there are plenty of advantages in protecting minority languages. These languages play a significant role in helping cultures not to lose their richness while if they become removed, a part of culture will be deleted. Another benefit which is of a high value here is that through preserving these languages not only would the culture be attractive but also nations are capable of showing their heritage to others, like their customs, traditions, etc.
In conclusion, from the economic perspective it seems to be beneficial to let minority languages disappear, but in the long run, the culture of a nation will be damaged. I believe that it is worthwhile to protect these local languages

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09737827715 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.856614977 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554307116105 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8317168077 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307888997428 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104428793356 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742817040157 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183059107343 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614150893049 0.056905535591 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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