Sharing is not only the right thing to do but it also makes me blissfully happy. I always believe in the famous saying “what goes around comes around”. So, it stands to reason that if you donate or support other people for example, beautiful things in life will smile on you in the future for sure.
I’ve read if you can share these things with others in the long run you may be objected to pressure, to some extent, depression, and autism. Consequently, sharing plays a fundamental role in our lives.
I’m sure that most of us have found a way how to share ideas, hopes and thoughts. Am I right? can someone tell for everyone here about your way? Okay, thanks for your share. My group discussed and there are several means of sharing ideas, hopes, and thoughts for you.
First of all, instead of using the phone, chatting with friends on social media, we should spend spare time, gather with our parents, siblings, grandparents,…. we can listen and express ourselves with them.
if we do that, we will be more connected with family members.
there are also activities that I knew when I was a student at nguyen du Dak Lak high school for the Gifted. On Teacher's day, there will be an area for students to write their wishes or feelings on a note, onto a larger board in the school lobby!. Owing to the fact that this activity is anonymous, you can feel free to share your thoughts about the teachers, well I think this is quite a meaningful activity.
As you can see in the picture it is sharing day. this activity is an opportunity for students of three grades studying at nguyen du high school to listen and ask questions to alumni who are students at different universities. Participants will have time to voice their thoughts according to each topic of the sharing day.
if you want to share your thoughts; on the contrary you don't know who to talk to, have you ever confessed to yourself? if you have, raise your hand. thank you. here's a website where you can send your private letters in the future: futureMe.org. Maybe some of you already know this site. it will help us pass the message on to ourselves in the next 1, 2, 5, or more years. By that date, an email will be sent back to you. I found it intriguing and highly recommend you try that.
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- Sharing is not only the right thing to do but it also makes me blissfully happy I always believe in the famous saying what goes around comes around So it stands to reason that if you donate or support other people for example beautiful things in life will 78
- Sharing is not only the right thing to do but it also makes me blissfully happy I always believe in the famous saying what goes around comes around So it stands to reason that if you donate or support other people for example beautiful things in life will 78
- Sharing is not only the right thing to do but it also makes me blissfully happy I always believe in the famous saying what goes around comes around So it stands to reason that if you donate or support other people for example beautiful things in life will 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, may, so, well, i think, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66386554622 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46374109129 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577030812325 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.492104607 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3913043478 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5217391304 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65217391304 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14546121963 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470092865067 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028194731268 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07095221364 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370588068656 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 50.2224549098 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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