Should capital punishment be banned? Are there any better alternatives?
There has been a controversial debate about the possibility of imposing capital punishment. From my perspective, by no means should capital punishment be enforced, and I believe there are more efficient alternatives that could be applied instead.
There are two major reasons against the enforcement of death penalty. Firstly, such irreversible punishment may lead to the execution of people who have been given a wrong verdict. There were cases that those who were not committed in any crime were on death row due to the mistaken conviction of the judge, and only after receiving the death penalty were they proved to be innocent. Secondly, this kind of punishment does not deter crimes. Contrary to the belief that capital punishment would act as a deterrent to crimes, the evidence from some cities which still applied capital punishment showed little reduction of the crime rate. Thus, there would not be any correlation between the crime rate and the imposition of such punishments. Furthermore, capital punishment is against the prior purpose of punishment, which is to rehabilitate the offenders.
I believe there would be more efficient alternatives than capital punishment. One alternative is to do community service, which is implemented as a solution to prison packed. It is also believed that by helping local communities, offenders would reform their behavior and have motivation to re-enter the society. Most nations replace the death penalty with life sentence with or without parole in the belief in which it is a more humane and cost-effective way of punishment.
In conclusion, death penalty should be abolished due to the possibility of mistaken execution and the inability to deterring crimes. Thanks to better alternatives, community service and life sentence have positive effects as opposed to capital punishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3875432526 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99792195842 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.477169088 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3228997027 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988724795339 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839806474579 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194545997691 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074032562776 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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