The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions measured in millions of tonnes from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

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The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.

Given is the line graph comparing four different sectors in the UK, in terms of the total amount of acid rain emission between 1990 and 2007.
Overall, four sectors experienced a decrease in the amount of acid rain emission produced over the period shown. The most significant drop was seen in the electricity, gas and water supply sector.
In 1990, the largest amount of acid rain gas came from the electricity, gas and water supply sector, producing around 3,3 million tonnes in comparison with the figure of above 2 million tonnes of other industries. The figure for domestic sector and transport and communication sector was nearly the same, at 0,6 and 0,7 million tonnes respectively.
The amount of acid rain gas produced in electricity, gas and water supply sector decline dramatically in the following years. After sharing the same figure with transport sector in 2003, electricity, gas and water supply sector was eventually responsible for 0,5 million tonnes, while the other sector shared a higher figure and peaked at 1 million tonnes in 2005. Both other industries sector and domestic sector fell gradually, and the amount of acid rain emission of domestic sector was always the lowest compared to other three sectors.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 377, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'industries'' or 'industry's'?
Suggestion: industries'; industry's
...at 1 million tonnes in 2005. Both other industries sector and domestic sector fell gradual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12376237624 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62468225982 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475247524752 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9615601773 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.375 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363079293136 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188286917929 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12544034245 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27823038168 0.15604864568 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122051902685 0.0819641961636 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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