Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services? Discuss the above and give your opinion using examples.
The investigation in social services such as the educational system or health maintenance is irrefutably sensitive and controversial topic, especially in the terms of whether the government or individual citizen themselves should take on this task. From my perspective, the government should be the one who responsible for these public services
To begin with, it is undoubtedly true that public services are one of the fundamental civil rights. There seem to be shreds of evidence that providing education and healthcare free of charge can be a good means of open up an opportunity for all citizens to access knowledge. This is shown by the constitutional recognition of the right to learn and to have the medical examination in several nations.
In the second place, not everyone can afford to pay tuition or hospital expenses. An illustration of this is that several children born in lower-class families are reportedly not allowed to go to school as a result of their parent's financial challenge. This deprived these youngsters of having the chance to study and grow to be a better person. Furthermore, there is numerous mortality annually which resulted from unable to hospitalized caused by the inability to pay hospital expense or medical insurance
Last but not least, these public service charges are already including in taxation. It is undoubtedly true that besides the investment in developing the economy, social welfare should also be a priority in taxational revenues spending. Sweden, which has the education system funded by the government budget and completely chargeless, can be an appropriate case in point
To sum up, the authority should invest more national budget in social welfare services such as education or healthcare since it is one of the fundamental civil rights but not everyone can afford to pay these expenses and it is already included in taxation that every citizen pay beforehand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a responsible'.
Suggestion: who is a responsible
...ctive, the government should be the one who responsible for these public services To begin wi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ho responsible for these public services To begin with, it is undoubtedly true th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay hospital expense or medical insurance Last but not least, these public service...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, second, so, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24025974026 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02363908576 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542207792208 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.4970369906 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.4 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317513241349 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10979144795 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821146578309 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178442641883 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702572120834 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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