Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer
nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the
responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their
citizens themselves?
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples
and with relevant evidence.
<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="fontstyle21"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:107%">There is a debate that whether rich countries must provide
many things for poorer ones or let their government take care them as it is
their must-to-do things. To me, I do not
strongly stand on what specific side. I think nurturing the citizens is the
main mission of their government but wealthy countries should also give a hand with
some stuffs supply only for those who have shortage of natural resourses. <o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="fontstyle21"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:107%">First of all, poor nations usually suffer famine, drought or
many disasters all the time. They really need support from other countries. Even
though each country have their own vision, mission and responsibility for their
civilization, the scarcity of nature lead them to impoverishment. They want to
independent but the conditions do not let them accomplish. <o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="fontstyle21"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:107%">Secondly, the undeveloped countries do not have enough
educated people to teach children since they all concentrate on survival first.
Therefore, they can not update with the world, their vision will be narrow and
they never catch others. That is why the wealthy nations should aid in widening
their knowledge. In spite of giving them all of the things such as food, fruit,
clean water, drugs…, training them to facing with the problems and how to
search for solutions are better methods.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="fontstyle21"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:107%">On the other hand, rich countries should not give a great
deal of things in many fields to the poorer. These actions will make the
government and people in undeveloped nations dependent and completely lean on
the givers. If people get all things they want, they will not have any purpose
for working. Their countries will gradually decrease and can not be risen up
anymore. Hence, the givers should only supply enough the poor’s demand when
their need is extremely essential.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="fontstyle21"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:107%">To sum up, wealthy nations should be sympathy with the
deficient ones by assisting them with daily stuffs and education but still can
let them stand on their feet. Unless poor nations figure out the problems that
they are facing with, they will never begin to improve and develop.</span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ons usually suffer famine, drought or many disasters all the time. They really nee...
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... mission and responsibility for their civilization, the scarcity of nature lead them to im...
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Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ill can let them stand on their feet. Unless poor nations figure out the problems th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, i think, such as, first of all, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2576.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 7.11602209945 5.12529762239 139% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.33991364291 2.80592935109 262% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 127.383770552 49.4020404114 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.0 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 34.0 4.38176352705 776% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108099832712 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559951823667 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571476373107 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452799701201 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535944669783 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 24.31 12.4159519038 196% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.