Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer
nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the
responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their
citizens themselves?
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples
and with relevant evidence.
There is a debate that whether rich countries must provide many things for poorer ones or let their government take care them as it is their must-to-do things. To me, I do not strongly stand on what specific side. I think nurturing the citizens is the main mission of their government but wealthy countries should also give a hand with some stuffs supply only for those who have shortage of natural resources.
First of all, poor nations usually suffer famine, drought or many disasters all the time. They really need support from other countries. Even though each country have their own vision, mission and responsibility for their civilization, the scarcity of nature lead them to impoverishment. Consequently, they want to be independent but the conditions do not let them accomplish.
Secondly, the undeveloped countries do not have enough educated people to teach children since they all concentrate on survival first. Therefore, they can not update with the world, their vision will be narrow and they never catch others. That is why the wealthy nations should aid in widening their knowledge. In spite of giving them all of the things such as food, fruit, clean water, drugs…, training them to facing with the problems and how to search for solutions are better methods.
On the other hand, not all the countries become poor because of disasters. For instance, Japan have suffered hundred of tsunami disasters but it is still a developed country, even the top one. Therefore, rich countries should not give a great deal of things in many fields to the poorer. These actions will make the government and people in undeveloped nations dependent and completely lean on the givers. Once nations parasite the wealthier nations, there is an existence risk to lose their sovereignty as a result of unfair deal between a shark and a quarry. Another reasons is that if people get all things they want, they will not have any purpose for working. Their countries will gradually decrease and can not be risen up anymore. Hence, the givers should only supply enough the poor’s demand when their need is extremely essential.
To sum up, wealthy nations should be sympathy with the deficient ones by assisting them with daily stuffs and education but still can let them stand on their feet. Unless poor nations figure out the problems that they are facing with, they will never begin to improve and develop.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...heir knowledge. In spite of giving them all of the things such as food, fruit, clean water...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ters. For instance, Japan have suffered hundred of tsunami disasters but it is still a ...
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Line 7, column 578, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...n a shark and a quarry. Another reasons is that if people get all things they want...
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Message: Did you mean ''?
... To sum up, wealthy nations should be sympathy with the deficient ones by assisting th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, first of all, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99503722084 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55146221282 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535980148883 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2901607363 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09523809524 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203600606585 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642891270695 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580314308492 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127896254442 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031574826724 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.