Smacking children is the best form of discipline
Children's behavior can be controlled in many ways but some people choose to use physical punishment. Smacking children is a way of teaching them good manners. This essay will argue why smacking children is important and necessary when raising them. Parents that spank their children when they misbehave are teaching them good manners.
Children that are raised without spanking when they misbehave tend to be irresponsible when they grow up. Some parents feel smacking children is an act of child abuse but that's not right, it is a way of making them responsible people in the society. A child that steals money from his or her parents purse needs to be smacked because the child might turn out to be a thief or armed robber. Spare the rod and spoil the child, if children are not physically punished when they do wrong their personal development will suffer.
Parents do not want to have children that are ill-mannered in that case, smacking them is very necessary. Children that grow up to be leaders in the society are responsible and we'll mannered because they were raised by parents who teach them to be responsible and discipline, they are punished if they behave in a mannerless way. Smacking has never killed any child, instead it helps to bring up children in a discipline way. Smacking children is not an act of maltreatment but a way of teaching them good manners.
This essay argued that smacking is essential in training of a child and it is not an act of maltreatment. In my opinion, I believe that smacking children is very imperative.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...g children is an act of child abuse but thats not right, it is a way of making them r...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a mannerless way" with adverb for "mannerless"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...pline, they are punished if they behave in a mannerless way. Smacking has never killed any child, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79850746269 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67838721534 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481343283582 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.490892776 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246658470972 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120453472156 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664185495018 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181162696072 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345616684934 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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