Small enterprises are being Phased out and replaced by big multinational Corporations. Do the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks?
It has been obseved that, in morden era many small business are collapse. However, It place taken by global industrys. If askey, I presume that the advantage of these Precautionary action would surpass its drawbacks my Position is elaborated further with resons and examples.
Examing my opinion, the strongest benefit of industry is speard the business in all over the world. Moreover, The internation Corporations are deals with many Countrys. Becuse of that they getting more and more orders. which increse the demand of works. Thats why more Job vacancy are gensated which gives good Salary to the workers.
Furthermore, the multinational Companys are make more income with use of modern technology ard machinerys. In addition, it reduce lots of word load due to that they compleat many Orders in minimum time which help to get big orders too. Because of that they earn more and also Pay their employess
much highere Salarys.
On the contrary, there are Some drawbacks of big companys like they destroy the business of nobility. Moreover, in certain Countrys Some Small business are run which gives them inherites. Because of industrys this type of business are spoild due to the financial Issues which they face becuse of no orders and at the end they have to Close their business Permanantly.
To Conclude, there are both merits as well as demedits of takeover small business by Global Companys. However, i believe that it has more Pros because, multinational Companys Provide more Jobs and help to reduce the unemployment from the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'places'?
Suggestion: places
...mall business are collapse. However, It place taken by global industrys. If askey, I ...
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Suggestion: Which
...that they getting more and more orders. which increse the demand of works. Thats why ...
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...that they getting more and more orders. which increse the demand of works. Thats why ...
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Suggestion: That's
...ers. which increse the demand of works. Thats why more Job vacancy are gensated which...
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Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
...hnology ard machinerys. In addition, it reduce lots of word load due to that they comp...
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Suggestion: and
.... To Conclude, there are both merits as well as demedits of takeover small business by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12549019608 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63121182409 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1726447122 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6875 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972423927889 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306730164323 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251001285413 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0439035800878 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222041433434 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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