The given picture shows the process of making electricity from coal. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the production of electricity out of coal. After the process it tranfer to houses and industries.
In the first step of production the coal is mined from the coal mine. After that it was crusher and make the powder form which transfered into gassifier with use of transportation vehicals. In the next step, the Solid waste and gas where saperated from it.
Moreover, after the saperation the gas went to the cooler over there, the tempature of gas was reduced. At the end, it tranfer to the gas power plant where the electricity was made as well as the extra waste like heat waste was removes from the plant. Finally, the electricity was transfer to the houses and industries with use of Cables.
Thus to conclude, the whole operation was quiet time consuming as well as the lots of waste was produced. But, at the end the electricity was distributed to the homes and industries.
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- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 75
- Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The diagrams below show how an office building looks at present and the plan for its future development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s and industries with use of Cables. Thus to conclude, the whole operation was qu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77848101266 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66602984037 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525316455696 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5261693666 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128568160617 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569867509435 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363882708584 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864192327348 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488912978771 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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