Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by Guhan on Sat, 08/31/2019 - 10:57

Not only will the smoker be affected by smoking but also people who surround them. Since it gradually destroys the respiratory system and may even cause cancer in certain people, it must be limited to one’s private space.

When a person smokes, the smoke from the cigar disperses into the atmospheric air which is then inhaled by people who stand nearby. This was proved by an Oxford University study, in which they claim that children of parents who smoke had immense amounts of smoke chemicals in their exhaled air. Even though all inhalants are not intentional smokers, the damage caused by the chemicals in the smoke is equal to all, as the same study reported of early onset of lung diseases among those children.

At the same time, it is immoral to let people suffer from consequences for crimes which they did not commit. Yes, smoking is, indeed, a crime because no one has permission to harm themselves or pollute the atmosphere. For instance, public smoking was banned in India after the incidence of lung cancer rates soared among school children because scientific evidence clearly indicates the link between lung cancer and cigarette smoke. Therefore, it is a moral duty to impose a ban on smoking in public places, particularly around children, to prevent the innocents from serious health consequences.

To conclude, people whoever stand near to a smoker inevitably inhale the smoke and get injured by it. Hence, I completely agree with the call for a ban on smoking in public spaces.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00395256917 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55056198373 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648221343874 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4100190286 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.090909091 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307547150103 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117677794465 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756783658784 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178917528719 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172230374936 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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