Social media has replaced the traditional methods of communication, and people use more and more social media to communicate, and to follow news and events. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, given the fact that urban life-style provide facilities and amenities the population of towns is rising sharply and obviously it is the reason of many troubles.
one of the issues that overpopulation of main cities bring is a crowded town. The more people, the more congestion. In other words, by growth of population more than city’s potential, the amount of cars will be increase particularly in inner side of the town and also the bottlenecks in streets grow too. Therefore, the exhausted fumes and gas emissions which are harmful for people will be more over and as a consequence diseases like cancers broadcast rapidly . The other problem of an overcrowded city is since the requests for facilities will be more than before, the cost of living will be staggering, such as, accommodation overpriced prices as a result of scarcity.
On possible approach would be governments should run some high fees for people who try to use private cars instead of public transportation. How ever, measures like this would probably be seen as excessive and difficult to enforce. A more feasible approach would be governments should focus on providing facilities for rural to decline the process of rural depopulation, furthermore, one the main reason of migration is joblessness which many people tackle with it, it would be a great solution if jobs opportunities could establish among different part of cities.
In conclusion, it is true that many cities don’t have the capacity of more population but there is much that can be done to address the problem constructively.
- The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. 78
- The bar chart below shows the production of the world’s oil in OPEC and non-OPEC countries. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words. 67
- The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Essay topics: Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think that it is a waste of time.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. 56
- You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter Say where / when you went on holiday Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday Tell them what you would like them to do 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...it is the reason of many troubles. one of the issues that overpopulation of ma...
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Line 5, column 467, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... diseases like cancers broadcast rapidly . The other problem of an overcrowded cit...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: HOW_EVER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'however'?
Suggestion: However
... cars instead of public transportation. How ever, measures like this would probably be s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18604651163 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02919314192 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600775193798 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6652431915 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.8 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.09753732634 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505200002765 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570825099467 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051227694756 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362791616582 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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