Social media has replaced the traditional methods of communication, and people use more and more social media to communicate, and to follow news and events. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, given the fact that urban life-style provide facilities and amenities the population of towns is rising sharply and obviously it is the reason of many troubles.
one of the issues that overpopulation of main cities bring is a crowded town. The more people, the more congestion. In other words, by growth of population more than city’s potential, the amount of cars will be increase particularly in inner side of the town and also the bottlenecks in streets grow too. Therefore, the exhausted fumes and gas emissions which are harmful for people will be more over and as a consequence diseases like cancers broadcast rapidly . The other problem of an overcrowded city is since the requests for facilities will be more than before, the cost of living will be staggering, such as, accommodation overpriced prices as a result of scarcity.
On possible approach would be governments should run some high fees for people who try to use private cars instead of public transportation. How ever, measures like this would probably be seen as excessive and difficult to enforce. A more feasible approach would be governments should focus on providing facilities for rural to decline the process of rural depopulation, furthermore, one the main reason of migration is joblessness which many people tackle with it, it would be a great solution if jobs opportunities could establish among different part of cities.
In conclusion, it is true that many cities don’t have the capacity of more population but there is much that can be done to address the problem constructively.
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.Write a letter to this friend. In your letter- Give details of your study plans- Explain why 11
- The diagram shows how apple is canned Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 71
- You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:•give details of what went wr 78
- You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home.You want to give your opinion about this.Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letterExplain how you learnt about these plansSay what you think of 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18604651163 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02919314192 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600775193798 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6652431915 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.8 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.09753732634 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505200002765 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570825099467 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051227694756 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362791616582 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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