Buildings are the face of a city as well as a culture. Some people have a opine that governments should take initiative to keep the old traditional appearance of a building, while it is renovating. I too completely agree with this opinion as it saves a culture.
To begin with, the buildings which built one or two centuries before, obviously need renovations in order to keep them intact. However, changing its identity to something else is not acceptable. First of all, if the government want to modernise the city, they can construct new buildings instead of changing the old one to new look. Old buildings are not only considered as buildings but it is a prof of our old talented engineers and other workers. For example, Taj mahal built by Shajahan, a mugal emperor still a mystery to the modern engineers. They tried hard to understand the secrets behind its construction , however, they finally understood that it is beyond their knowledge. Secondly , the old buildings are the only remaining of the old tradition . For instance, Taj Mahal is a vital example of the mugal culture.
Moreover,these monuments are a treasure of knowledge. New generation of engineers can learn many important aspects of architecture from this buildings. They should discover how our ancestors build these giant buildings without crane and other modern technology. They did not know how the pyramids in Egypt were built. With the technology available in the past, it was almost unimaginable to think of such big pyramids. In addition to that, these monuments are a great tool of study for our children as well as the research groups all over the world. Children can learn many things by directly seeing it in front of them. If this buildings are not there ,they can only learn from pictures and videos, which will not inspire them.
To conclude, old buildings are vital to current world in many ways. Thus, governments should make sure that identity of the building not affected during it is renovation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95223880597 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7926502371 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549253731343 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5510626902 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9523809524 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186940539942 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536550239359 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594533815573 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127969535128 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595641154789 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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