Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do, it could not function.
Regulations and statutes play a significant element in the community. Many would argue that society runs well if everyone can follow laws and rules. I totally agree with this point of view.
First of all, without the laws to extinguish social crimes, a community can be in disorder. Because there could be no firm basis to impose strict punishments on offenders and the chaoses can be surged. For example, robbery, drug addiction, murder can get out of control easily; in fact, they will pose a serious threat to society. Thus, to live safely, laws and rules are a must since they act as a warning against people who commit crimes.
In addition, when the rules do not present, it is so challenging to conserve the environmental pollution. Companies, before discharging waste into water, have already conducted the waste water treatment. If laws are not practicable, water pollution can occur due to factories's industrial waste may contaminate the water. Furthermore, garbage burning will affect the air that can lead to the greenhouse effect. People health can also be influenced by the air pollution and it can bring about serious consequences of lung cancer or respiratory infection.
Finally, regulations are really essential in this nowaday situation. As we know, the whole world is suffering from the Corona epidemic so everyone is required to stay at home to avoid the spread of Covid 19. If no statutes were enforced, the virus would be widespread.
In conclusion, society can dissolve without rules and laws. Therefore, I believe that community can be functional only when the acts exist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'conserving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: conserving
...es do not present, it is so challenging to conserve the environmental pollution. Companies,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the water. Furthermore, garbage burning will affect the air that can lead to the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lung cancer or respiratory infection. Finally, regulations are really essentia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14068441065 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80964152531 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653992395437 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2291660017 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5294117647 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129752147616 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388528328285 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432798479451 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654746334335 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276735185755 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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