Some animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea. What are the reason? What solution to solve them?
Nowadays, more and more activities from people, which makes are making creatures living on land and in the ocean become vanished. This can stem from many causes, which calls for possible solutions to be adopted.
There are several factors responsible for these actions this trend. Firstly, one possible reason could be that people sell valuable animal species with a high price to entrepreneurs prospective buyers by going hunting frequently in the forest and under the sea. As a result, the diversity of animal is likely becoming to decreased, which makes the ecosystem unbalanced. Another cause could be that/In addition, more and more developing countries have been constructing a large number of factories to catch up with the Industry Revolution, while companies in developed countries/ones are have been trying to put their establishments into places which have abundant and cheap workforces. For example, a company that produces chemical goods will release a source of pollutants into the environment. This leads to poisoning the animals living nearby in that area.
There are a number of measures which can be taken to solve this issue. Firstly, the government should punish strictly individual or an organization, who goes hunting illegally. This can be done by imposing heavy punishment and, such as incarcerating poachers hunting seriously. Another solution is for civilians to protect animals. One way to do this is to build a naturally fresh place where endangered species can live in.
In conclusion, the extinction of various creatures results from many causes, and there are several actions that can be taken to address this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...loping countries have been constructing a large number of factories to catch up with the Industry...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...mpanies in developed countries/ones are have been trying to put their establishments...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34865900383 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84402184237 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6067831859 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103932971658 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371222054092 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352161780383 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602342690979 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233009458043 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.