Some animals species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea.
What are the reason?
What is solution to solve them?
It is true many animals are being declined by human activities on land and sea .like,population is emitted by industries which are harmful for spaces. I will explain reasons and solutions to solve it in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, Population is increasing day by day. People have to construction for living. To explicate, people are doing deforestation to get field as well as get material for making their houses. This trend has become big reason for extincting animal species because 80% creatures Live in woods. For example,Two years ago, in Australia there was a big fire in jungle.It was started by high global temperature which produced from human vehicle . With this incident many animals had become prey of death. To mitigate it, government should provide rules to prevent incline Population.
The another reason caused by this issue, that is sea water is spoiled by ships. To elaborate it, people use water transport to export their things one nation to another nation as well as grow and blossom their business. Moreover, oil can be leaked by ships on some situation due to this it would be harmful for fishes. For instance, a survey was conducted by the Canadian government that was more water animals are dying hasty than other animals. To solve it, business man should less do trade as well as use specific transport.
To conclusion, although human activities are vital for developing country but it would be become hinders for animal species
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03265306122 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70100156951 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620408163265 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9231811925 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208258005894 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673377319167 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689938426377 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148251871103 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627253544514 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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