Some argue that all citizens should be required to peform a certain amount of volunteer work in their community each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this proposal? Give explanations and examples to support your opinion.
the notion of mandatory volunteering is provocative. There are many ways in which citizens can give their time freely to help the commynity by picking up garbage, helping the poor, and building the local relationships. These can all benefit when done properly. However, it is not a good idea to force volunteer work from every citizen each year because not all people have the capacity to give their time freely at every stage in life, and a mandatory system of volunteering can promote corruption.
It is strongly disagreeable to expect every person to give rie freely year after year as this is logically flawed since people’s lives change and they may not be able to do this. Communities are filled with individuals such as young children, geriatrics, and disabled who may not have the ability to do free work. Indeed, it would be unrealistic to expect a single mother of three children, working two jobs to make ends meet, to then also five an addition hours of unpaid work each year to contribute to her community. This is one of two good reasons that governments must avoid this system of forced volunteer work
A second major point against expecting regular volunteer work is the potential for abusing this system for the benefit of the organizers. Indeed, human work effort has great value, and it is easy for authorities to take advantage of this for benefiting the needs of the few instead of the many. Historically, conscription has been in place in many countries which has led to miliary aggresstion in oder to incease the prosperity of the rulling class
In conclusion, compulsory volunteer work may seem like a good idea initially, but it is fundamentally flawed because of individual circumstance and malicious opportunities. Therefore, is strongly disagreeable to implement. Ideally,volunteering is just that, “an individual choosing to give their time freely without coercion”
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09584664537 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02213455483 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.6145255855 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.916666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238634063213 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082013409057 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438746158635 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131811588959 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590916770886 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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