some argue that good health is the basic human need, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of the private health care outweigh the advantages?
every one is aware that “health is Wealth” so maintaining good health is the first and foremost thing
that every human being should have in their mind. medical services should not be given to the private health care companies who make huge profit out of it.
Now a days private health care services are abundant in our country and most of the people run behind those services thinking they may get better advice when compared with the public one. private health care services charge high fee for patient registration, diagnosing the type of disease, scan, medical tests for all kind of people irrespective of their economic status failing to do so they may not be able to gain profit. Such kind of services is not fair to the human society because their focus might be on making money but may not be towards quality of the service.
Another quality which describes the private health care services is the faster and cost effective way of rendering services and due to which they can be able to provide resolution to all the affected persons with a better price itself. private health care services with online facility, token system and large number of employees can provide the service effectively which may not be present in other companies.
To summarize, a private health care company which offer services at a affordable price are best to the man kind so that all human beings can maintain good health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93827160494 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42194268392 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551440329218 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.2424235466 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412787180138 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206128673154 0.084324248473 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667046031706 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249111941999 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648621282676 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.